After the Interim Critique this week, Ollie and I have been given a lot of helpful advice from other students in the class as well as tutors. There are a list of points I have made note of, in order to help improve the potential of our final animation, and there are some more things I am going to work on in Post Production in terms of my character.
Notes taken from the crit:
1. Try not to fit too many different camera angles into this one short animation as it may make it look rushed and jumpy.
2. The Mermaid character could still do with altering slightly as it still clashes with the design of the Robot.
3. Don't have the ocean too complex, as this is an unrealistic goal and will take too much attention away from the animation and design of the main characters.
How will these points be addressed?
1. We will continue to create our animation, and play around with the camera angles afterwards, because our minds might change during the production.
2. I will alter the design of my Mermaid further by making her much shorter. At the moment I think the main thing that is making her not fit in is the fact that she has ended up looking too realistic and long.
3. We have decided that Ollie will be focusing on the ocean and I more on the sun and sky. We need to do some experimenting together with different techniques in 2D and 3D to see what looks good and what takes an acceptable amount of time.
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