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After showing the work I had so far, I came away from this presentation with a clear idea of what I needed to do. Aside from the obvious fact of simply continuing on with the animation, I had two specific things to think about:
- music
- background perspective
I was encouraged to think about the possibility of making the gentle music in the background slightly muffled, to suggest it may be coming from a broken radio. I really liked this idea and this is something I decided to keep in mind for post-production.
It was also brought to my attention that the perspective of the counter in one of my environment drawings was not quite right, so I spent some time after the presentation putting this right.
This crit was incredibly useful, because it allowed me to hear thoughts & areas for improvement that I hadn't thought of, which is the good thing about getting work in progress looked at by fresh eyes.
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