After receiving feedback from my peers, we came to the decision that if this animation was to be done again, I would need to pay more attention to the squash and stretch element of it by making the curves thinner as they stretch further away.
This animation received quite a lot of possotive feedback because of the way in which I had gone about it. People seemed to like the fuzzy effect I gave it using biro. However I think it could have been improved with further manipulation on Photoshop, for example the changing of the colour levels.
I am really pleased with the unravelling of this sound, however it was a popular suggestion that it would be a better ending to have the ribbon disappear off the screen completely.
This animation is probably the least fluid out of the 5, it could do with having a few more frames added in there so that it wouldn't look as jumpy. However I did enjoy the whole process of creating it because I love to paint!
A lot of people did seem to think that this animation could use more colour, which I agree with. The intenseness of the sound it shown through the animation however it is very simplistic.
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